{"id":723,"date":"2007-06-16T00:31:53","date_gmt":"2007-06-15T23:31:53","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/dickonedwards.co.uk\/diary\/index.php\/archive\/dodging-the-draft-part-two\/"},"modified":"2007-06-16T10:48:11","modified_gmt":"2007-06-16T09:48:11","slug":"dodging-the-draft-part-two","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.dickonedwards.com\/diary\/index.php\/archive\/dodging-the-draft-part-two\/","title":{"rendered":"Dodging The Draft &#8211; Part Two"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Calming down from my Exercise Book shopping joy, I sit down and start the entry about the night-time caller anew. It becomes riddled with crossings-out, floating corrections and other revisions: quite shockingly so. Were I back at school and the entry a piece of English homework, my teachers and parents would be very worried indeed. But the draft of the subsequent entry (this one) is a definite improvement, with such mistakes in markedly reduced abundance. It is an exercise book in every sense: my longhand muscle is getting a workout.<\/p>\n<p>After the first entry is finished, the results are so full of corrections that I decide to go to a second draft, this time using an A4 London Library notebook, with a matt blue cover. I rewrite the Silvine draft, and incorporate the better elements from the aborted Moleskine attempt of the previous day. Even so, there&#8217;s still quite a few crossings-out and corrections.<\/p>\n<p>Finally, I go online and type up the entry. And even at this stage I am revising and changing things.<\/p>\n<p>So there it is. My first diary entry to be drafted in three separate notebooks. I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s noticeably better than the best of my diary archives, but it&#8217;s certainly better than the first Moleskine draft. All I&#8217;ve done is try to make it as good as all the entries I&#8217;ve written digitally, except that I have evidence of the process on paper. And it&#8217;s being presented with this detail that I hope will train me to write more accurately from the off.<\/p>\n<p>Thanks to the notebook drafts I can see every early wording, every single one of the changes, and not have them lost to the ether as soon as a &#8216;Save&#8217; button is pressed. Longhand drafts shape the mind in an entirely different way to computers, logging each decision to omit or augment, every choice in the void of all possibilities.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t deny there must also be a sense of unfettered nostalgia in the mix, reclaiming my pre-digital years as a boy of letters and diligent school pupil. But either way, the switch to paper drafts has given me a rush of pure satisfaction unparalleled by any drug, legal or otherwise. It&#8217;s so good to see my handwriting again.<\/p>\n<p>***<\/p>\n<p>In the British Library today. As Readers arrive, they have to pick up a special transparent carrier bag for taking into the Reading Rooms. This way, the security guards can quickly check they&#8217;re not stealing any of the Library&#8217;s stock.<\/p>\n<p>In the cloakroom, as I&#8217;m preparing my own clear bag, I can&#8217;t help noticing one item that the young lady next to me is placing in hers. It is a large white frisbee.<\/p>\n<p>I wonder if she uses it when staff aren&#8217;t looking, like Steve Martin&#8217;s roller skating in art galleries in <em>LA Story<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Additionally, I note that the man on duty at the Library&#8217;s Information Desk is wearing a monocle.<\/p>\n<p>***<\/p>\n<p>Dad relates a story from my childhood. It&#8217;s a hot summer day, and he&#8217;s meeting me when school is out at the crossing by the gates. I am wearing my neat school grey sweater, with my shirt collar buttoned up, and an immaculately knotted tie.<\/p>\n<p>Dad: Don&#8217;t you want to take off your tie and sweater like all the other boys?<\/p>\n<p>Me: No.<\/p>\n<p>Dad: (puzzled) Why not?<\/p>\n<p>Me: I like to be smart.<\/p>\n<p>I am all of seven years old.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Calming down from my Exercise Book shopping joy, I sit down and start the entry about the night-time caller anew. It becomes riddled with crossings-out, floating corrections and other revisions: quite shockingly so. Were I back at school and the entry a piece of English homework, my teachers and parents would be very worried indeed. 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